Quadrille. Take a pill
In the spill of it all
I threshold did the use of all messages
Try
And then I did know that it was a filler
For the real thing where they all try to hump
The girl in the backrow of the cartoon theatre.
Copyright B E Saunders 2016
Composed and published for tonight’s pub get together on dVerse, a Quadrille including the word “spill”.
TOO LONELY TO MAKE SENSE - AGELESS POETRY - DADA 
“threshold” as verb is fantastic.
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That’s my neologistic intent coming thru
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Glad this is working now! Excellent use of spill and threshold as a verb.
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Enjoyed the surprise of the ending.
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It’s just “flash” so as always I am pleasantly surprsed at praise – thank you indeed!
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The ending made me smile.
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This piece is rather playful. The twist at the end seals it!
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Yes.. hate does spill
in 9 year old back
row theaters
of domination
and hate.. hate
spills iN eYes oF
soUls wItH no
emPathy
for heARts
thaT need
paTches
for
pit
oF SpiRiT
no bottom
wHOle…:)
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Oh I VERY “like”! Hilarious mon friends! Thank you!
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SMiles and
Thanks FriEnd..:)
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Loved this! Flarf?
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Pardon me my igorance….flarf? means que? please?
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Ah, sorry… it’s a form of poetry that first came about in the early 2000s. At first sight, it might be nonsensical, but it actually makes sense. That’s absolutely NOT to say your poem was nonsense – i thought it was fantastic and you used words in a way that was refreshing. And i loved the last part.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flarf_poetry
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No – Neolgistic – I am a Voice Hearer who wries down his dictates in free form
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Ah. Well I have learned something new and interesting, so thank you!
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And thank you!
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Sorry Neologistic
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Very well done. 🙂
Pub nights can be extremely inspirational at times.
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